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BUILDING CHARACTERS MADE EASY

 

by Billie A. Williams

Approximately 17,000 Words
BUILDING CHARACTERS MADE EASY

by Billie A Williams

 

Table of Contents

 

I.                   Introduction

 

II.                Building Character Profiles Through the Zodiac

1.      Zodiac signs on 3 x 5 cards

2.      Basic Meaning of 12 Zodiac Signs with a two word anchor

3.      How Astrology Can Help Increase Character Conflict

4.      Archetypes

 

III.             Personalities Defined by:

1.      Careers for Your Characters

2.      Which Tree Did You Fall From

3.      Character Traits As Assigned to the Months of the Year

 

IV.             Getting To Know Your Characters Through Profile Sheets

1.      Lead Character Fact Sheet

2.      Opposition Character Fact Sheet

3.      Other Character Fact Sheets

4.      Character Chart Creation Profiler

5.      Character Prompt and Profiles Sheet - Short

6.      Fiction Writer’s Character Chart  (Link)

7.      Characters in Fiction

8.      Characters in Romance

9.      Types of Heroes For Your Novel (especially Romance)

10.  Character Worksheets

11.  Character Building

12.  Biography Data Sheet and Variations

 

 

V.                Miscellaneous

1.      Bringing Your Character to Life

2.      Six Questions to Ask of Your Story

3.      Story Idea Check List

4.      Using Your Five Senses

5.      Creating Believable  well-Rounded Characters with Hobbies, Pets, Nickname, Body Language

6.      Defining Facial Features, lips, teeth, eyes, nose

7.      Using Tarot Cards in Character Development

 

VI.             Naming Your Character – Considerations

 

 

 

VII.          Alternative Ways to Explore Character

1.      Character Explorations

2.      Our Happiness

3.      Our Qualms – Our Fears

4.      Exercises Dialogue

5.      Creating Characters Through Interviews

6.      Narrative Boundaries

 

VIII.       Personality/Character Problem Fixers

1.      Ten Character Fixes

2.      Talking Head Avoidance

3.      The Plot Thickens

 

THE END:  There are no Right or Wrong Ways to Write Proof is in the Doing

 

 

 


INTRODUCTION

 

Why should I waste my time with all these character building forms, exercises and readings? Why can’t I just dive in and write my story using whatever people I choose naming them as I go along.  You can, but the list of reasons why you shouldn’t is almost as long as the table of methods, ways and means for building a character profile.

The short answer is consistency, believability, reliability, and keeping details straight. Let’s look at each of these reasons more closely.

Consistency: The characteristics of this character her personality or type, her physical description, where she lives, where she works, who are her friends and family right down to the kind of car she drives or doesn’t drive and the reasons she doesn’t. Without a profile, without some of the other devices for keeping your character notes straight, you may trip yourself up.

Believability: Would this character say, do, react or behave in this manner as s/he’s been developed so far?

Reliability: Again, you as an author can’t force a character who is terrified of snakes into a room full of snakes to pick up a quarter someone dropped in that room. That is an extremely ridiculous example, but you get the drift. Your characters are not checkers or chess pieces, you have breathed life into them – they are real. They will only behave in a certain way given the personality you have developed for them – or at least, should have developed for them. Think of your character building as CPR (CBR) for your character’s life.

Keeping the details straight when you have two or more characters in your novel, is a challenge. Background information on them should also be charted. From the towns  they live in complete with  streets, stores, restaurants, places they frequent, or even go to once or twice during the course of the novel—your details need to be consistent throughout the story. Your time line of story history can easily become polluted by the time you trek across two hundred pages or more. You can take the hassle out of keeping these things straight if you jot them down as you go. You need to know who was privy to what information or you could easily have your sleuth solve a crime with clues he never had—your reader’s will remember. Slight of hand doesn’t work with your reader. The old formula – “if you bring a gun out in chapter one – it better have shot someone before the end of the story,” or your reader will lose faith in you. The same is true of the opposite. If the clue never showed up, then it can’t be used to solve the crime or conclude the book no matter what genre it is.

If your character has green eyes in scene one, she better not have brown, or blue, or hazel anywhere else in the book unless it’s deliberately done with colored contact lenses as a planned disguise.

If your character hoists a magnum to shot someone, she better know how to use it and have the strength, both physically and emotionally, to use it. To deliberately shoot someone takes a certain chutzpah. Not every personality type would be able to kill someone any more than a first time deer hunter can necessarily shoot the first deer she encounters. Human life would weigh much more heavily on a normal person’s conscience than an animal I would think, thus the emotional fortitude of someone that would shoot someone must be shown before hand.

Trust me when I say, if you spend the time to develop your character fully before you begin your novel, you will have solved ninety percent of your problems before you start. The writing will be that much easier for it. Even your character’s name, as you will see, can have a profound impact on your story.

In Careers for Your Characters, Raymond Obstfeld and Franz Neumann say, “To create realistic, well-developed characters, you have to write with authority. Careers…enables you to describe their professional lives with the accuracy and details of an insider. It covers such things as Professional jargon and buzz words, Educational requirements, salaries, benefits, perks, and expenses. Each profession’s average daily schedule is shown  and how job reality differs from public perception of the job. Obstfeld and Neuman list publications and web sites for further research into your chosen profession.

Patricia Cornwell’s novels use the career of forensic pathologist. Cornwell is intimately familiar with the profession and it shows in her work. Others such as James Patterson, Dean Koontz, and John Grisham rely heavily on careers that they were involved in before they became writers. I’m not saying you have to be in any one type of profession to write about it with authority, you only need to research thoroughly to add authenticity to your work.

Creating Character Emotions, by Ann Hood gives the author an in depth look at showing instead of telling character actions and reactions. “Sweaty palms, butterflies in the stomach. Pacing back and forth, show your character being nervous,” she says. “…fresh images, words and gestures to evoke feelings in your fiction,” will set you apart from the novice. How do you show hate-love-fear-grief-guilt-hope-jealousy and other major emotions Hood provides some insight and answers of how you should put feelings into words?  Take a quick check in your own vault of experiences. Think back to a time when you felt any of these emotions. Record what your physical manifestation of the emotion was at the time. This will give you a very accurate means for showing instead of telling.

“Fiction’s traditional virtues—depth, empathy, intimacy…good writing must always be vivid, particular and surprising,” says Rand Richards Cooper.

“To render character emotions is probably the most important information you can use as a fiction writer,” Hood says. Emotions affect every other element of fiction from dialogue and action to character development. Emotions lead us to more believable plot twists and turns, enhance dramatic tension, help illustrate themes and in short, they inform every aspect of our fiction.

When a reader asks you “How did you know?” When you captured the essence of the emotion for them so exactly in one of your characters because you rendered the emotion so well, so effectively and honestly that your reader believed you had read their mind, or been where they had been. You can feel you have told the truth through your character, made him/her believable and worth the reader’s time and caring.

The Writer’s Path by Todd Walton and Mindy Toomay will lead you through exercises in exploring fiction building that is worth the time. “Stories result from the action of characters. Put an interesting character in a dynamic situation, and you have the makings of a good story,” says Walton and Toomay. The raw material for your stories comes from your characters personal histories. Developing their backstory will show you their motivation and agenda if you pay attention as we have said before.

By providing you with the bibliography, the forms I use when I begin a new novel, and information I’ve learned along the way I hope you will be able to skip the learning curve and jump into developing characters as large as life and novels that speak those truths that need to be told, if only to entertain and enlighten and hold your reader in your story’s embrace.

 

 

CHAPTER TWO

BUILDING CHARACTER PROFILES THROUGH THE ZODIAC
Zodiac signs  
I have these on – 3 x 5 Cards

Capricorn

The Goat

Planet

Element

Personality traits

December 22 – January 19

Saturn

Earth

Ambitious, blunt, loyal, persistent

 

Gemini

The Twins

 

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

May 21 –

June 21

Mercury

Air

Ambitious, alert, intelligent, temperamental

 

Aries

The Ram

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

 

March 21 –

April 19

Mars

Fire

Bold, impulsive, confident, independent

 

Leo

The Lion

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

July 23 –

August 22

Sun

Fire

Noble, generous, enthusiastic, temperamental

 

Pisces

The Fishes

 

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

 

February 19 –

March 20

Neptune

Water

Sympathetic, sensitive, timid, methodical

 

Cancer

The Crab

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

June 22 –

July 22

Moon

Water

Moody, sensitive, impressionable, sympathetic

 

 

 

 

Aquarius

The Water Carrier

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

January 20-

February 18

Uranus

Air

Unselfish, generous, idealistic, original

 

Taurus

The Bull

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

April 20 –

May 20

Venus

Earth

Determined, stubborn, devoted

 

Scorpio

The Scorpion

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

 

October 24 –

November 22

Mars

Water

Loyal, philosophical, willful, domineering

 

Virgo

The Virgin

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

August 24 –

September 22

Mercury

Earth

Intellectual, methodical, placid, tactless

 

Sagittarius

Planet

Elements

Personality Traits

November 22 –

December 21

Jupiter

Fire

Practical, Imaginative, Mature, Just

 

Libra

The Scales

Planet

Element

Personality Traits

September 23

October 23

Venus

Air

Just, sympathetic, orderly, persuasive, sociable

BASIC MEANINGS OF 12 SIGNS OF THE ZODIAC

 

Aries

“I Am”

Warrior or Criminal

 

March 21 – April 20

Positive Expressions

Negative Expressions

 

Pioneering, initiative, born leader, assertive, direct, high-powered, capable of new beginnings, open, passionate, energizing, risk taking, energizing, creative, dynamic, independent, individualistic, courageous, confrontational, personal, personally involved.

Overly excitable, rash, reckless, impractical, pushy, impulsive, hasty, agitating, self-absorbed, lacks foresight, and follow through, impatient, conceited seeks immediate satisfaction, headstrong, tactics unreceptive, quick tempered, egotistical, black and white, narcissistic, simplistic

Taurus

“I Have

Pleaser or Fool

 

 

April 21 – May 21

Practical, respectful of tradition, resourceful, productive, patient, persistent, steady, earthy, sensual, loyal, devoted, has self-esteem, values self, managerial, trustworthy, artistic, strong-willed, down home warm.

Possessive, jealous, overly attached, lazy, inert, materialistic, values only physical material satisfactions, money-grubbing, unoriginal, greed unspiritual, stubborn, slow, prodding, craves security, self-indulgent, ultraconservative, unchanging, dull, boring, bullheaded

Gemini

“I Think

Journalist or Trivia Master

 

May 22 – June 21

Logical, scientific, clever, witty, knowledgeable, sociable, congenial, interactive, adaptable, lively, versatile, diverse, agile, dexterous, inquisitive, curious, verbal, eloquent, articulate, mentally stimulating, synthesizing, living in the present, amusing, alert, quick, multifaceted

Mercurial, changeable, fickle, scattered, two faced, inconsistent, flighty, overly logical, tricky, manipulative, scheming, cunning, double-dealing, dishonest, shallow, unphilosophical, verbose, chattering, detached, unfeeling, concerned with trivia, unreliable, unsteady

 

 

 

Cancer

 “I Feel”

 

Mother or Child

 

June 22 – July 23

Sensitive, protective, self-protective, nurturing, maternal, intuitive, psychic, deeply feeling, attuned to the unconscious, soft-hearted, comforting, receptive, empathetic, consoling, responsive, family oriented, rooted, shrewd, appreciative of the past, cautious, thrifty

Possessive, smothering, pampering, suffocating, hypersensitive, overly emotional, easily hurt, crybaby, impressionable, childish, touch, selfish, pathetic, self-pitying, martyr, indulgent, secretive, withdrawn, self-absorbed, clinging, needy, helpless, passive

Leo

“I Will”

Leader or Dictator

 

July 24 – August 23

Dignified, prestigious, confident, self-assured, self-possessed, leading, powerful, optimistic, commanding, self-respecting, self-aware, magnanimous, affectionate, creative, dramatic, entertaining, strong-willed, determined, loyal, generous, romantic, playful, spontaneous, warm

Self-worshiping, conceited, must be center of attention, childish, snobbish, role playing, extravagant, show off, power-mad, condescending, needs excessive love, arrogant, indulgent, ostentatious, melodramatic, demands admiration and appreciation

Virgo

“I analyze”

Busybody or Workaholic

 

August 24 – September 23

Analytical, mentally sharp, methodical, exacting, detailed, orderly, meticulous, systematic, helpful, diligent, industrious, studious, efficient, helpful, selective, discriminating, unassuming, modest, responsible, dependable, sharp, concerned, obliging, constructively critical, assisting, busy, health conscious

Perfectionist, overly organized, always busy, fussy, overly fastidious, overly skeptical, picky, always dissecting, critical, separative, servile, self-prostituting, submissive, menial, petty, ingratiating, hypochondria, complaining, incapable of relaxing, workaholic, fanatical about diet

 

 

 

 

 

 

Libra

“I balance”

Counselor or Manipulator

 

 

 

 

September 24 - October 23

Peace-loving, harmonious, sociable, beauty consciousness, relationship oriented, refined, suave, elegant, strives for equality, weighing, cultured, pleasing, artistic, agreeable, charming, hospitable, good taste, diplomatic, tactful, fair, evaluating, aware of all points of view, objective

Defines fairness for own benefit, unable to accept reality, up and down, wishy-washy, other centered, seeks peace at any price to avoid conflict, docile, vacillating, indecisive, snobbery, vain, pseudo-sophisticated, oscillating, extremist, overly-compromising, contradictory, over-emphasizing appearances

Scorpio

“I Desire”

Healer or Sorcerer

 

October 24 – November 22

Regenerative, healing, strong, courageous, loyal, deeply feeling, intense, passionate, magnetic, enigmatic, profound, insightful, capable of confronting powerful emotions, self-disciplined, controlled, probing penetrating, investigating, resourceful, shrewd

Destructive, judgmental, lustful, overly intense, sharp, cruel, sarcastic, violent, possessive, jealous, demonic, morbid, brooding, wallowing, closed, self-denying, all or nothing, extremist, hidden, secretive, exploitive, injurious, willful, using insight gained for selfish purposes, thrives on suffering

Sagittarius

“I see”

Clergy or Hippy

 

November 23 – December 21

Exploring, outreaching, freedom loving, carefree, optimistic, jovial, high-spirited, generous, open-hearted, amiable, altruistic, prophetic, guiding, enlightened, outdoors oriented, philosophical, profound, open-hearted, prophetic, altruistic, ethical, truthful, principled, inspirational, wise, teaching, direct, frank

Full of wanderlust, can’t tolerate restrictions, impractical, unrealistic, impatient, head in the clouds, opinionated, long-winded, bookish, pretentious, moralistic, dogmatic, hypocritical, restless, blunt, tactless, outspoken, wasteful, extravagant, self-deluding, overly abstract

 

 

 

Capricorn

“I Utilize”

Administrator or Snob

 

December 22 – January 20

Responsible, serious, practical, thrifty, cautious, reserved, successful, persistent, driving, keen sense of timing, committed, loyal, steadfast, persevering, reliable, powerful, hardworking, fatherly, steadfast, economical, thrifty, stoical, prudent, executive capability, high-reaching, ambitious, enterprising, law-abiding, realistic

negative melancholic, gloomy, despondent, cool, cold, brooding, pessimistic, fatalistic, stingy, slow, tedious, materialistic, overly cautious, miserly, cruel, severe, closed, inhibited, repressed, rigid, obsessed with rules-formalities, conservative, ultra- conventional, status-seeking, power-hungry, inaccessible, authoritarian, patronizing, anthropic .

 

 

Aquarius

“I Know”

Reformer or Extremist

 

January 21 – February 19

Humanitarian, progressive, reformist, freedom-loving, individualistic, independent, original, unique, inventive, unusual, unconventional, intellectual, scientific, truth-seeking, attuned to universal will, intuitive, friendly brotherly, concerned, political, open-minded, unprejudiced

Lawless, uncommitted, stubborn, inflexible, radical, revolutionary, intolerant of intolerance, aloof, impersonal, detached, distant, remote, coolly logical, abstract, rebellious, contrary, erratic, bizarre, eccentric, pseudo-liberal, self-willed, confuses self will with higher will, unpredictable.

Pisces

“I Trust”

Spiritualist or Con Artist

 

February 20 – March 20

Compassionate, unselfish, holistic, inspired perceiving the unity or essence, unpretentious, synthesizing, introspective, spiritual, transcendent, inspirational, visionary, idealistic, serene, psychic, intuitive, flowing, surrendering, flexible, forgiving, soothing, gentle

Sacrificing, timid, directionless, weak-willed, overly impressionable, daydreaming, impractical, unrealistic, deluded, escapist, drug or alcohol addictive, bitter, cynical, self-depreciating, easily victimized, vague, confused, undiscriminating, illogical, unanalytical, cowardly, spineless, weak imprudent,

easily hurt, deceptive, absorbent