BUILDING CHARACTERS MADE EASY
by Billie A. Williams
Approximately 17,000 Words
BUILDING CHARACTERS MADE EASY
by Billie A Williams
Table of Contents
I.
Introduction
II.
Building Character Profiles Through the Zodiac
1.
Zodiac signs on 3 x 5 cards
2.
Basic Meaning of 12 Zodiac Signs with a two word anchor
3.
How Astrology Can Help Increase Character Conflict
4.
Archetypes
III.
Personalities Defined by:
1.
Careers for Your Characters
2.
Which Tree Did You Fall From
3.
Character Traits As Assigned to the Months of the Year
IV.
Getting To Know Your Characters Through Profile Sheets
1.
Lead Character Fact Sheet
2.
Opposition Character Fact Sheet
3.
Other Character Fact Sheets
4.
Character Chart Creation Profiler
5.
Character Prompt and Profiles Sheet - Short
6.
Fiction Writer’s Character Chart (Link)
7.
Characters in Fiction
8.
Characters in Romance
9.
Types of Heroes For Your Novel (especially Romance)
10. Character
Worksheets
11. Character Building
12. Biography Data Sheet
and Variations
V.
Miscellaneous
1.
Bringing Your Character to Life
2.
Six Questions to Ask of Your Story
3.
Story Idea Check List
4.
Using Your Five Senses
5.
Creating Believable well-Rounded Characters with Hobbies, Pets, Nickname,
Body Language
6.
Defining Facial Features, lips, teeth, eyes, nose
7.
Using Tarot Cards in Character Development
VI.
Naming Your Character – Considerations
VII.
Alternative Ways to Explore Character
1.
Character Explorations
2.
Our Happiness
3.
Our Qualms – Our Fears
4.
Exercises Dialogue
5.
Creating Characters Through Interviews
6.
Narrative Boundaries
VIII.
Personality/Character Problem Fixers
1.
Ten Character Fixes
2.
Talking Head Avoidance
3.
The Plot Thickens
THE END: There are no Right or Wrong Ways to Write Proof is in the
Doing
INTRODUCTION
Why should I waste my time with all these character building forms, exercises and
readings? Why can’t I just dive in and write my story using whatever people I choose naming them as I go
along. You can, but the list of reasons why you shouldn’t is almost as long as the table
of methods, ways and means for building a character profile.
The short answer is consistency, believability, reliability, and
keeping details straight. Let’s look at each of these reasons more closely.
Consistency: The characteristics of this character her personality or type,
her physical description, where she lives, where she works, who are her friends and family right down to the kind
of car she drives or doesn’t drive and the reasons she doesn’t. Without a profile, without some of the other
devices for keeping your character notes straight, you may trip yourself up.
Believability: Would this character say, do, react or behave in this manner
as s/he’s been developed so far?
Reliability: Again, you as an author can’t force a character who is
terrified of snakes into a room full of snakes to pick up a quarter someone dropped in that room. That is an
extremely ridiculous example, but you get the drift. Your characters are not checkers or chess pieces, you have
breathed life into them – they are real. They will only behave in a certain way given the personality you have
developed for them – or at least, should have developed for them. Think of your character building as CPR (CBR) for
your character’s life.
Keeping the details straight when you have two or more characters in your novel, is a
challenge. Background information on them should also be charted. From the towns they live
in complete with streets, stores, restaurants, places they frequent, or even go to once or
twice during the course of the novel—your details need to be consistent throughout the story. Your time line
of story history can easily become polluted by the time you trek across two hundred pages or more. You can
take the hassle out of keeping these things straight if you jot them down as you go. You need to know who was
privy to what information or you could easily have your sleuth solve a crime with clues he never had—your
reader’s will remember. Slight of hand doesn’t work with your reader. The old formula – “if you bring a gun
out in chapter one – it better have shot someone before the end of the story,” or your reader will lose faith
in you. The same is true of the opposite. If the clue never showed up, then it can’t be used to solve the
crime or conclude the book no matter what genre it is.
If your character has green eyes in scene one, she better not have brown, or blue, or
hazel anywhere else in the book unless it’s deliberately done with colored contact lenses as a planned
disguise.
If your character hoists a magnum to shot someone, she better know how to use it and
have the strength, both physically and emotionally, to use it. To deliberately shoot someone takes a certain
chutzpah. Not every personality type would be able to kill someone any more than a first time deer hunter can
necessarily shoot the first deer she encounters. Human life would weigh much more heavily on a normal
person’s conscience than an animal I would think, thus the emotional fortitude of someone that would shoot
someone must be shown before hand.
Trust me when I say, if you spend the time to develop your character fully before you
begin your novel, you will have solved ninety percent of your problems before you start. The writing will be
that much easier for it. Even your character’s name, as you will see, can have a profound impact on your
story.
In Careers for Your Characters, Raymond Obstfeld and Franz Neumann say, “To
create realistic, well-developed characters, you have to write with authority. Careers…enables you to
describe their professional lives with the accuracy and details of an insider. It covers such things as
Professional jargon and buzz words, Educational requirements, salaries, benefits, perks, and expenses. Each
profession’s average daily schedule is shown and how job reality differs from public
perception of the job. Obstfeld and Neuman list publications and web sites for further research into your
chosen profession.
Patricia Cornwell’s novels use the career of forensic pathologist. Cornwell is
intimately familiar with the profession and it shows in her work. Others such as James Patterson, Dean
Koontz, and John Grisham rely heavily on careers that they were involved in before they became writers. I’m
not saying you have to be in any one type of profession to write about it with authority, you only need to
research thoroughly to add authenticity to your work.
Creating
Character Emotions, by Ann Hood gives the author an in depth look at showing instead of telling character
actions and reactions. “Sweaty palms, butterflies in the stomach. Pacing back and forth, show your character being
nervous,” she says. “…fresh images, words and gestures to evoke feelings in your fiction,” will set you apart from
the novice. How do you show hate-love-fear-grief-guilt-hope-jealousy and other major emotions Hood provides some
insight and answers of how you should put feelings into words? Take a quick check in your own
vault of experiences. Think back to a time when you felt any of these emotions. Record what your physical
manifestation of the emotion was at the time. This will give you a very accurate means for showing instead of
telling.
“Fiction’s traditional virtues—depth, empathy, intimacy…good writing must always be
vivid, particular and surprising,” says Rand Richards Cooper.
“To render character emotions is probably the most important information you can use
as a fiction writer,” Hood says. Emotions affect every other element of fiction from dialogue and action to
character development. Emotions lead us to more believable plot twists and turns, enhance dramatic tension,
help illustrate themes and in short, they inform every aspect of our fiction.
When a reader asks you “How did you know?” When you captured the essence of the
emotion for them so exactly in one of your characters because you rendered the emotion so well, so
effectively and honestly that your reader believed you had read their mind, or been where they had been. You
can feel you have told the truth through your character, made him/her believable and worth the reader’s time
and caring.
The Writer’s
Path by Todd Walton and Mindy Toomay will lead you through exercises in exploring fiction building that is
worth the time. “Stories result from the action of characters. Put an interesting character in a dynamic situation,
and you have the makings of a good story,” says Walton and Toomay. The raw material for your stories comes from
your characters personal histories. Developing their backstory will show you their motivation and agenda if you pay
attention as we have said before.
By providing you with the bibliography, the forms I use when I begin a new novel, and
information I’ve learned along the way I hope you will be able to skip the learning curve and jump into
developing characters as large as life and novels that speak those truths that need to be told, if only to
entertain and enlighten and hold your reader in your story’s embrace.
CHAPTER TWO
BUILDING CHARACTER PROFILES THROUGH THE
ZODIAC Zodiac signs I have these on – 3 x 5
Cards
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Capricorn
The
Goat
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
traits
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December 22 – January
19
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Saturn
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Earth
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Ambitious, blunt,
loyal, persistent
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Gemini
The
Twins
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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May 21
–
June
21
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Mercury
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Air
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Ambitious, alert,
intelligent, temperamental
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Aries
The
Ram
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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March 21
–
April
19
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Mars
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Fire
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Bold, impulsive,
confident, independent
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Leo
The
Lion
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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July 23
–
August
22
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Sun
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Fire
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Noble, generous,
enthusiastic, temperamental
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Pisces
The
Fishes
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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February 19
–
March
20
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Neptune
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Water
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Sympathetic,
sensitive, timid, methodical
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Cancer
The
Crab
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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June 22
–
July
22
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Moon
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Water
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Moody, sensitive,
impressionable, sympathetic
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Aquarius
The Water
Carrier
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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January
20-
February
18
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Uranus
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Air
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Unselfish, generous,
idealistic, original
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Taurus
The
Bull
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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April 20
–
May
20
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Venus
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Earth
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Determined, stubborn,
devoted
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Scorpio
The
Scorpion
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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October 24
–
November
22
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Mars
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Water
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Loyal, philosophical,
willful, domineering
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Virgo
The
Virgin
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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August 24
–
September
22
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Mercury
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Earth
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Intellectual,
methodical, placid, tactless
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Sagittarius
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Planet
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Elements
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Personality
Traits
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November 22
–
December
21
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Jupiter
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Fire
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Practical,
Imaginative, Mature, Just
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Libra
The
Scales
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Planet
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Element
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Personality
Traits
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September
23
October
23
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Venus
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Air
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Just, sympathetic,
orderly, persuasive, sociable
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BASIC MEANINGS OF 12 SIGNS OF THE ZODIAC
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Aries
“I Am”
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Warrior or Criminal
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March 21 – April 20
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Positive Expressions
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Negative Expressions
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Pioneering, initiative, born leader, assertive, direct, high-powered,
capable of new beginnings, open, passionate, energizing, risk taking, energizing, creative,
dynamic, independent, individualistic, courageous, confrontational, personal, personally
involved.
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Overly excitable, rash, reckless, impractical, pushy, impulsive,
hasty, agitating, self-absorbed, lacks foresight, and follow through, impatient, conceited
seeks immediate satisfaction, headstrong, tactics unreceptive, quick tempered, egotistical,
black and white, narcissistic, simplistic
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Taurus
“I
Have
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Pleaser or Fool
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April 21 – May 21
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Practical, respectful of tradition, resourceful, productive, patient,
persistent, steady, earthy, sensual, loyal, devoted, has self-esteem, values self,
managerial, trustworthy, artistic, strong-willed, down home warm.
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Possessive, jealous, overly attached, lazy, inert, materialistic,
values only physical material satisfactions, money-grubbing, unoriginal, greed unspiritual,
stubborn, slow, prodding, craves security, self-indulgent, ultraconservative, unchanging,
dull, boring, bullheaded
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Gemini
“I Think
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Journalist or Trivia Master
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May 22 – June 21
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Logical, scientific, clever, witty, knowledgeable, sociable,
congenial, interactive, adaptable, lively, versatile, diverse, agile, dexterous, inquisitive,
curious, verbal, eloquent, articulate, mentally stimulating, synthesizing, living in the
present, amusing, alert, quick, multifaceted
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Mercurial, changeable, fickle, scattered, two faced, inconsistent,
flighty, overly logical, tricky, manipulative, scheming, cunning, double-dealing, dishonest,
shallow, unphilosophical, verbose, chattering, detached, unfeeling, concerned with trivia,
unreliable, unsteady
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Cancer
“I
Feel”
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Mother or Child
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June 22 – July 23
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Sensitive, protective, self-protective, nurturing, maternal,
intuitive, psychic, deeply feeling, attuned to the unconscious, soft-hearted, comforting,
receptive, empathetic, consoling, responsive, family oriented, rooted, shrewd, appreciative
of the past, cautious, thrifty
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Possessive, smothering, pampering, suffocating, hypersensitive, overly
emotional, easily hurt, crybaby, impressionable, childish, touch, selfish, pathetic,
self-pitying, martyr, indulgent, secretive, withdrawn, self-absorbed, clinging, needy,
helpless, passive
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Leo
“I Will”
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Leader or Dictator
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July 24 – August 23
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Dignified, prestigious, confident, self-assured, self-possessed,
leading, powerful, optimistic, commanding, self-respecting, self-aware, magnanimous,
affectionate, creative, dramatic, entertaining, strong-willed, determined, loyal, generous,
romantic, playful, spontaneous, warm
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Self-worshiping, conceited, must be center of attention, childish,
snobbish, role playing, extravagant, show off, power-mad, condescending, needs excessive
love, arrogant, indulgent, ostentatious, melodramatic, demands admiration and
appreciation
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Virgo
“I analyze”
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Busybody or Workaholic
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August 24 – September 23
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Analytical, mentally sharp, methodical, exacting, detailed, orderly,
meticulous, systematic, helpful, diligent, industrious, studious, efficient, helpful,
selective, discriminating, unassuming, modest, responsible, dependable, sharp, concerned,
obliging, constructively critical, assisting, busy, health conscious
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Perfectionist, overly organized, always busy, fussy, overly
fastidious, overly skeptical, picky, always dissecting, critical, separative, servile,
self-prostituting, submissive, menial, petty, ingratiating, hypochondria, complaining,
incapable of relaxing, workaholic, fanatical about diet
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Libra
“I balance”
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Counselor or Manipulator
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September 24 - October 23
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Peace-loving, harmonious, sociable, beauty consciousness, relationship
oriented, refined, suave, elegant, strives for equality, weighing, cultured, pleasing,
artistic, agreeable, charming, hospitable, good taste, diplomatic, tactful, fair, evaluating,
aware of all points of view, objective
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Defines fairness for own benefit, unable to accept reality, up and
down, wishy-washy, other centered, seeks peace at any price to avoid conflict, docile,
vacillating, indecisive, snobbery, vain, pseudo-sophisticated, oscillating, extremist,
overly-compromising, contradictory, over-emphasizing appearances
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Scorpio
“I Desire”
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Healer or Sorcerer
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October 24 – November 22
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Regenerative, healing, strong, courageous, loyal, deeply feeling,
intense, passionate, magnetic, enigmatic, profound, insightful, capable of confronting
powerful emotions, self-disciplined, controlled, probing penetrating, investigating,
resourceful, shrewd
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Destructive, judgmental, lustful, overly intense, sharp, cruel,
sarcastic, violent, possessive, jealous, demonic, morbid, brooding, wallowing, closed,
self-denying, all or nothing, extremist, hidden, secretive, exploitive, injurious, willful,
using insight gained for selfish purposes, thrives on suffering
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Sagittarius
“I see”
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Clergy or Hippy
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November 23 – December 21
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Exploring, outreaching, freedom loving, carefree, optimistic, jovial,
high-spirited, generous, open-hearted, amiable, altruistic, prophetic, guiding, enlightened,
outdoors oriented, philosophical, profound, open-hearted, prophetic, altruistic, ethical,
truthful, principled, inspirational, wise, teaching, direct, frank
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Full of wanderlust, can’t tolerate restrictions, impractical,
unrealistic, impatient, head in the clouds, opinionated, long-winded, bookish, pretentious,
moralistic, dogmatic, hypocritical, restless, blunt, tactless, outspoken, wasteful,
extravagant, self-deluding, overly abstract
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Capricorn
“I Utilize”
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Administrator or Snob
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December 22 – January 20
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Responsible, serious, practical, thrifty, cautious, reserved,
successful, persistent, driving, keen sense of timing, committed, loyal, steadfast,
persevering, reliable, powerful, hardworking, fatherly, steadfast, economical, thrifty,
stoical, prudent, executive capability, high-reaching, ambitious, enterprising, law-abiding,
realistic
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negative melancholic, gloomy, despondent, cool, cold, brooding,
pessimistic, fatalistic, stingy, slow, tedious, materialistic, overly cautious, miserly,
cruel, severe, closed, inhibited, repressed, rigid, obsessed with rules-formalities,
conservative, ultra- conventional, status-seeking, power-hungry, inaccessible, authoritarian,
patronizing, anthropic .
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Aquarius
“I Know”
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Reformer or Extremist
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January 21 – February 19
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Humanitarian, progressive, reformist, freedom-loving, individualistic,
independent, original, unique, inventive, unusual, unconventional, intellectual, scientific,
truth-seeking, attuned to universal will, intuitive, friendly brotherly, concerned,
political, open-minded, unprejudiced
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Lawless, uncommitted, stubborn, inflexible, radical, revolutionary,
intolerant of intolerance, aloof, impersonal, detached, distant, remote, coolly logical,
abstract, rebellious, contrary, erratic, bizarre, eccentric, pseudo-liberal, self-willed,
confuses self will with higher will, unpredictable.
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Pisces
“I Trust”
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Spiritualist or Con Artist
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February 20 – March 20
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Compassionate, unselfish, holistic, inspired perceiving the unity or
essence, unpretentious, synthesizing, introspective, spiritual, transcendent, inspirational,
visionary, idealistic, serene, psychic, intuitive, flowing, surrendering, flexible,
forgiving, soothing, gentle
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Sacrificing, timid, directionless, weak-willed, overly impressionable,
daydreaming, impractical, unrealistic, deluded, escapist, drug or alcohol addictive, bitter,
cynical, self-depreciating, easily victimized, vague, confused, undiscriminating, illogical,
unanalytical, cowardly, spineless, weak imprudent,
easily hurt, deceptive, absorbent
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